Yo there. I got some B's for you to look at if you'd like. If I do the pull-up one, I think I'll try out some petal-y looking things. I think the thing that makes the first one look the coolest is the graphic, so I dunno how much that matters. And I've got a few ideas for the cork one too. The most practical is my favorite. Guess which one that is?
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I like the first the best I think, and I don't think it is just the graphic. the form is nice and simple!!
ReplyDeleteThese look good, some small things can make them even better. At this point, the materials and forms are pretty accurate. You should absolutely type in your notes at this point to make the presentation look polished. Think hard about composition - you have some good renderings but nothing on the page is helping you. Think in 3s, thirds, think about scale to communicate 1-2-3. Because it wouldn't be much time, I would redo these pages so that the compositions help you sell your design.
ReplyDeleteI think you should do #1, with more iterations on both the pattern and interior bubble shapes. The contrast between the simple silhouette and complex patterns and interior shapes is interesting - finding the best way to execute that will pay off in the final design.
ReplyDeletethanks for the comments!
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